PART 1

Okay. So the name of the chapter says PART 1 So That means that the chapter isn't over yet. There will be a part two and a part three. The other chapters shouldn't be like this but I'm too lazy to finish the whole chapter right now.

Chapter 1: A Pleasant Kithood, PART 1

So welcome back for another chapter! This chapter isn't a filler anymore. It's important. Pay attention particularly at Seedpaw and his behavior.

Chapter 1: A Pleasant Kithood
Cloudkit strolled into the bright sunlight, he stood for a moment, inspecting the camp. There was Fernpaw, gulping down some magpie. Cloudkit skirted her. She looked extremely disagreeable at the moment. At that moment Seedpaw hurried out of the apprentice's den. Feeling it was a precaution, Cloudkit hurled himself behind the nearest leafy shrub. Seedpaw, who was nearing his warrior ceremony, looked jumpy. He jumped as Fernpaw asked, "Hey! Whats in that leafwrap?" "Uhhh...." "What's bothering you?" "HAVING A NOSY SISTER LIKE YOU!" snarled Seedpaw who was glaring at Fernpaw. Seedpaw left his sister to stare after him as he brushed his way through the reeds. Cloudkit hurried to keep up. Frequently darting back into shelter as Seedpaw whirled around to glare at the trees suspiciously. Finally the stopped, but this was only because of the squirrel who scrambled up a tree. Dropping the leafwrap that Fernpaw had noticed, Seedpaw chased the squirrel and after seizing it began to tear it up. Cloudkit noticed that the leafwrap was a tail lenth away from him. Feeling an odd curiousity Cloudkit leapt toward the leafwrap, but a paw forced him back into the dirt. "What do you think you're doing?" snarled Seedpaw.

Sorry

Sorry for not updating. A long weekend is coming up, so I should get some updates there. The next chapter is called A Pleasant Kithood. It's basically a filler. The next one is called Ambush so that should be interesting. I'll get those out and then the next one the following Saturday or Sunday. I'll probably be updating twice or three times a week. So the fanfic(the first one in the series) should be finished next month. Then I'll probably post a short story and then I'll get on with the series.
~Moonswirl~

Cloudy Dawn Summary

Cloudy Dawn- The Three have failed. One was the betrayer. Now a dark time is approaching and two kits must hurry to save the Clans because ShadowClan and it's strange leader Darkstar are getting stronger and as they strive to take over the Clans The two, Cloudpaw and Dawnpaw, must save the Clans from the apocalypse coming.

So technically(read the prologue) Dawnpaw and Cloudpaw are the kits of Silverbrook and Firestorm. Because of the fake prophecy that Dovetalon devised(you'll learn more about her and this "wretched" sister of hers. But I'm saying that she's Dovekit/paw in The Fourth Apprentice grown up,her power is different because this story was planned before TFA came out.) Anyways so the story is about the two kits who AREN'T in a prophecy and not directly involved but are in an important part preventing this apocalypse coming(apocalypse means "end of the world" but in this case it means "end of the Clans") So I really like the outline! The series includes six books. The titles haven't been decided yet! In another story(back about 80 years ago in human time) there are the spawn of the two most evil cats ever to live and how one will follow in the path of her parents creating the Dark Forest and one shall fight back against her reputation, creating StarClan. Another talks about Dovepaw and her early life(how she becomes evil) and Jayfeather's and Lionblaze's loves and Ivypaw and how she struggles against her jealousy.(bet you know who's the "wretched" sister now.) The next one is about Dovetalon's betrayal and her plans and Ivypool's attempt to stop them. And the last too are a secret(they continue with Dawnpaw and Cloudpaw's adventures!)

Anyway...
Yeah so If your interested please leave a comment or vote on the poll. I am going to update three times a week for now. So keep checking back!

~Moonswirl~

Book 1 Cloudy Dawn. Prologue: The Fake Omen

Prologue

The Fake Omen

Orangepool fumbled with the leaf wrap. Her mentor, Graypool, had recently passed away. It seemed that RiverClan was suffering loss after loss. Just this morning young Silverbrook had just died kitting, which was much to early. Her mate, Firestorm, was suffering some sort of severe grief. Orangepool had seen the kits. They were tiny things, squirming pityfully in the darkness of the Nursery. One had already died and Orangepool was unsure whether the other to would live through the day. She was making a calming wrap. Hopefully it would help poor Firestorm. But first Orangepool needed to check on the kits. Cowfur had agreed to look after the remaining kits with her own, but there was still a chance that one was dieing.

Orangepool hurried out of her den. Before she could proceed to the nursery however, a gray cat appeared, her fur shining with stars.

"Graypool!" said Orangepool with joy.

"Hello dear," murmurred the pale gray she-cat.

" Well I need to hurry! The Kits!"

"Those kits are evil!"

"Kits! Evil?"

"They will become evil."

"What? How? Those kits?"

"They must be seperated. If they're not they will bring destruction to RiverClan!"

"Oh." Orangepool said, convinced.

"Be careful! If they meet eachother and realize they are siblings the disaster will come anyway!"

Orangepool nodded, "Thanks for this warning." And with that Orangepool turned away.

She did not see Graypool's pale fur turn dark gray.

She did not see her eyes turn to a dark golden.

She did not see the Starlight in her fur turn to murky darkness.

For the cat that was not Graypool was from a very horrible place. A place with no Starlight. And what this imposter ensured the destruction of not only RiverClan but all the Clans. She turned away gleefully thinking of the revenge that she had been waiting to throw on her wretched sister and the Clan she hated so much.

There was one glitch in that evil plan of Dovetalon's.

The two kits. If they met and realized the were siblings there was still hope for the six Clans.

My New Fanfiction Series!

Hello! I am currently working on a series called: Bringing of Light. It takes place about the time of the fifth series in Warriors. Lionblaze, Jayfeather, Dovepaw and Ivypaw are there but three have already died. There will be six books in the series. Three about the hero's (Cloudpaw and Dawnpaw), Two that are my version of the Omen of the Stars series and one other that takes place in the mountains and is about how StarClan/Dark Forest were created.

I am now working on Cloudy Dawn. The Prologue will come out soon. I update often enough! There will be a poll on that. So look out for the prologue which will come in two days at the latest. After the book is finished(or before!) I will post a family tree, which I am sure would clear a lot of things up for everyone. There will be a Super Edition and a following series which has also been planned. I will also give a summary thing. I will be posting more stories and Series! So look out for those too!
Bye for Now,
~Moonswirl~

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