Friday, February 12, 2010

Chapter 1: A Pleasant Kithood, PART 1

So welcome back for another chapter! This chapter isn't a filler anymore. It's important. Pay attention particularly at Seedpaw and his behavior.

Chapter 1: A Pleasant Kithood
Cloudkit strolled into the bright sunlight, he stood for a moment, inspecting the camp. There was Fernpaw, gulping down some magpie. Cloudkit skirted her. She looked extremely disagreeable at the moment. At that moment Seedpaw hurried out of the apprentice's den. Feeling it was a precaution, Cloudkit hurled himself behind the nearest leafy shrub. Seedpaw, who was nearing his warrior ceremony, looked jumpy. He jumped as Fernpaw asked, "Hey! Whats in that leafwrap?" "Uhhh...." "What's bothering you?" "HAVING A NOSY SISTER LIKE YOU!" snarled Seedpaw who was glaring at Fernpaw. Seedpaw left his sister to stare after him as he brushed his way through the reeds. Cloudkit hurried to keep up. Frequently darting back into shelter as Seedpaw whirled around to glare at the trees suspiciously. Finally the stopped, but this was only because of the squirrel who scrambled up a tree. Dropping the leafwrap that Fernpaw had noticed, Seedpaw chased the squirrel and after seizing it began to tear it up. Cloudkit noticed that the leafwrap was a tail lenth away from him. Feeling an odd curiousity Cloudkit leapt toward the leafwrap, but a paw forced him back into the dirt. "What do you think you're doing?" snarled Seedpaw.

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